1. Use an orderly writing process
2. Spill the beans at the beginning
3. End with next steps, stated with
emphasis
- 3.1 Use periodic sentences, sentences which delay the main
idea until the end of the sentence
3.2 Use concrete, active-voice verbs, as described below
3.3 Shorten sentences or, at least, shorten main clauses
3.4 Use parallelism for a series of like ideas
3.5 Put minor ideas in modifiers and main ideas in main clauses
3.6 Use precise words, words your reader can easily connect with
4. Use time to persuade
5. Write coherent paragraphs
- 5.1 Write clear topic sentences
- 5.2 Paragraphs are graphical elements
- 5.2.1 Beware of one-sentence paragraphs
5.2.2 Beware of overlong paragraphs
6. Pay attention to tone
- 6.1 Organize negative information
carefully
- 6.1.1 Start by showing careful consideration
- 6.1.2 Give reasons
- 6.1.3 Say "no" if you must
- 6.1.4 Give the reader an alternative
- 6.2 Say what is, not what isn't
6.3 Remove hostile words
6.4 Avoid telling your reader what
he or she thinks
6.5 State the facts forcefully but
be cautious about interpretation
6.6 See quotation marks as red flags
6.7 Write to the TO: line, not to the
copy list
- 6.8 Write full sentences when tone
is an issue
7. Vary your sentence length and
structure
- 7.1 Keep sentences under about
thirty words, three lines or so.
- 7.2 Join and subordinate choppy
ideas.
- 7.3 Tighten loose sentences.
- 7.4 Place modifiers carefully
- 7.5 Prefer standard sentence order
8. Use parallel structure for like
ideas
8.1 When writing a lengthy series of similar ideas, use outline
or bullet format, but do so only if the ideas fall naturally
into parallel structure
8.2 Do not force unlike ideas into a structure that shows likeness
8.3 See repetitions of wording as clues about your ideas
8.4 If you can make things perfectly parallel, look for efficiencies
such as tables, graphics, or ellipses
8.5 In a pairing or series of elements mismatched in length,
try to put the shortest first and the longest last
8.6 Make sure that bullet points are in parallel form and parallel
logic, even in Powerpoint presentations
9. Use the most precise vocabulary
possible
- 9.1 Prefer the shorter, more widely
known word
9.2 Reduce three clues to vagueness
- 9.2.1 Intensifiers like very
9.2.2 Qualifiers like somewhat
9.2.3 Not
- 9.3 Beware of vague connecting
words and phrases
- 9.4 Reduce "the (noun) of"
phrases to phrases with verbs
9.5 Distinguish between buzz words
and technical language
- 9.6 Avoid certain well-known vague
nouns and verbs
- 9.7 Make it simple
10. Be concise
- 10.1 Start with the idea of greatest
importance to the reader
10.2 Reduce your statements to those
only of interest to the reader
10.3 Reduce metadiscourse
10.4 Reduce redundancy
10.5 Reduce traditional wordy phrases
10.6 Reduce wordy adverbial phrases
10.7 Go on a which hunt
10.8 Collapse plodding explanations
11. Use concrete active-voice verbs
- 11.1 Reduce being verbs
- 11.1.1 Wordy transitions
- 11.1.2 He-is-a-man-who phrases
- 11.2 Reduce phrases in which it
or there is hooked to the verb to be
- 11.2.1 Wordy hedges
- 11.2.2 Expletives of necessity
- 11.3 Reduce general-action verbs
11.4 Reduce passive-voice verbs
12. Reduce clutter
- 12.1 Avoid sign language in sentences; write words
12.2 Avoid telegraphic style
12.3 Write complete sentences, unless you are using outline or
bullet format
12.4 Reduce your use of parentheses
13. Observe the conventions
- 13.1 Reference: Punctuation
- 13.2 Reference: Grammar
- 13.3 The most common problems
- 13.3.1 Prefer singular agreement
for collective nouns
- 13.3.2 Make sure that they
points to a stated plural noun
- 13.3.3 Beware of certain plurals
that do not end in 's'
- 13.3.4 Use a colon only after
a completed idea.
- 13.3.5 Spell out numbers one
to ten
- 13.3.6 Limit your use of the -self
words
- 13.3.7 Use a hyphen to join together
compound adjectives
- 13.3.8 Use standard comma rules
- 13.3.8.1 Prefer the serial comma,
as in A, B, and C
- 13.3.8.2 Use a comma after certain
introductory elements
- 13.3.9 Use punctuation appropriately
in relation to quotation marks
- 13.4 Glossary of grammatical terms
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