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13.3.8.2 Use a comma after introductory elements that are long, have verbs in them, or could be misread without the comma

Should you use a comma after a group of words introducing the main idea of a sentence? Here are five defining sentences:

  • On Tuesday he came to see me.

If the introductory words are short and are simple and contain no verb form, do not separate them from the main idea--the independent clause--that follows.

  • When it was Tuesday, he came to see me.

If the introductory group of words has a subject and verb but cannot stand alone as sentence, use a comma. Such clauses generally start with when, while, because, as, since, if, although, though, before, or after.

  • Remembering me, he came to see me.

If the introductory group of words contains a word ending in "-ed" or "-ing" and is not acting as the subject of the independent clause, use a comma. Such introductory groups of words are called participial phrases.

  • After many hours of thought and hours of fruitless fretting, he came to see me.

If the introductory group of words is substantial, use a comma. What is substantial? Four words or more.

  • Inside, the diners were enjoying their meals.

If a comma would prevent misreading, use one.

So the rule could roughly be reduced to this: if the introductory element is long or has a verb form in it or if a comma would prevent misreading, use a comma to separate the element from the main idea which follows.

 

Courtesy of John Mercer Associates, www.MercerWriting.com

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