Process Beginnings Endings  Persuasion Paragraphs Tone Flow Parallelism Inflation Conciseness Verbs Clutter Conventions	10.5 Reduce traditional wordy phrases
	Here are some of the culprits: in the event that due to the fact that question as to whether or not for purposes of in order to in the course of in the process of despite the fact that in regard to has the opportunity to is engaged in at an early date in a short period of time few in number large in size reason is because he is a man who it has come to our attention in terms of in the amount of These phrases seem to have been crafted and disseminated to extend 50-word ideas into 500-word essays. You're not writing essays anymore.
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